Monday, 14 April 2008

Live in the Dream



To be perfect in his eyes

along the way she stumbles,

she falls.


And as she sleeps alone at night,

all of her dreams

shall come to light.


Much mirth and warmth,

an faultless love.

Mornin' sun awakens

her slumber.

Upon her pillow,

her head lay heavy.

A solitary tear escapes.

Hombre susurrante...she knows,

all but a dream.

12 comments:

Semaj Mahgih said...
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Nunyaa said...

Is that meant to be funny or what?

Semaj Mahgih said...

And as she sleeps alone at night,

all of her dreams

shall come to light.

... and be fulfilled.

CherryPie said...

Lovely :-)

Did you write it?

Nunyaa said...

Yes Cherie I did, and thank you :-)

Crushed said...

It's nice to have someone to dream about, though.

CherryPie said...

In answer to Crushed I do have ;-)

Welshcakes Limoncello said...

It's lovely, nunyaa.

Beaman said...

This is such a sad piece to me but very beautiful. I think it resonates particularly with me today due to the dreams I had last night.

Great writing Nunyaa. Thank you for entering it into my Poetry Prompt

Missy said...

I truly enjoyed this piece. The emotion shows through with the last line.

Missy
www.rebicmel-poeticponderings.blogspot.com

Nunyaa said...

Thank you Beaman and Missy, appreciate what others think :-)
Am off to your site now Missy.

Enreal said...

This has a haunting quality to it... beautifully written.